帮忙看下小弟的英语作文，不足之处请指出，谢谢

有几处用词不当、语法标点小错误。已改正。

I

don't

know

what

I

want

,or

what

is

my

life

target.

And

I

don't

know

what

kind

of

person

I

am

.

I

think

many

people

maybe

ask

themselves

that

“what

I

want”，“what

do

I

need”.

And

then

,what

I

want

to

do

perhaps

just

enjoy

this

process.

Some

people

need

friend

,

money

,

power

,sex

etc.

The

key

is

whether

you

ever

had

a

dream.Its

noble

or

vulgar.

Whatever,it

belongs

to

you.

What

are

you

suppose

to

do

to

get

what

you

want

more

and

to

be

faster.Of

course,

it's

depends

on

your

principle.

Don't

care

about

what

others

thinking

about

you——ugly,

fat,false

loftiness,selfish,arrogance,hypocrisy,all

the

bad

words

to

describe

you.Remember

that

the

others

think

you

are

unique.

Remeber

your

dream

,

then

to

make

it

come

ture.

The

key

is

to

enjoy

this

process.

建议可以再斟酌一下用词，比如“丑陋”一般不直接用ugly，而用not

goodlooking，“肥胖”——overweight