近来,一些省市相继传来酝酿高考改革的消息,英语考试将作为改革的重点,请根据下面的漫画.用英语写一篇短

One possible version:

As is displayed in the picture, some provinces are carrying out reforms in “Gaokao”, especially focusing on the English subject. The score of English will be dropped while those of other subjects like Chinese and maths will jump higher. This causes a heated discussion.

Some government officials think English learning takes up too much time, simply to shift a learner’s attention from other subjects. As for the advantages of the required subjects, many people put Chinese and maths in the first place, for English is most likely to be useless after “Gaokao”.

Such opinions invite much concern. Personally, we students pick up English not only for the entry to a college but for a future career, which we can not actually foresee today. Anyhow, a foreign language can possibly take us that far. In case of that, English teaching should attach greater importance to the language skills rather than grammar and vocabulary to save time for other subjects.?

试题分析:本文内容要求是:描述漫画内容;分析漫画所反映的现象;提出你的看法。要用一般将来时和一般现在时。注意人称的一致性。字数要求100词左右。还应该注意使用较高级的词汇和句子的衔接,以提高作文的档次。

亮点说明文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如take up,be likely to,还运用了非谓语形式作主语或;非限制性定语从句等。并注意了句子变化和句子之间的衔接如:As for,not only …but,Anyhow,while等。