tobeabetterman

这是一篇话题作文。首先，本文要求以“To Be a Better Man”为题写作，题目要求翻译成中文即为：成为一个更好的人。我们发散思维想到成为一个更好的人可以从学习方法、生活习惯、交友沟通等方面进行努力。同时，我们也可以写成为一个更好的人需要哪些方面的特质。写作的主体内容就这样确定好了。其次，我们还要注意写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为五段，第一段引出话题；第二、三、四段分别从学习方法、生活习惯、交友沟通等任选三方面进行阐述；第五段收尾。全文要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

案例一原文：

Everyone wants to be better. In order to improve myself, I have made some plans.

First of all, I will study harder. I am going to listen to the teachers carefully in class and finish the housework on time. When I meet difficulties, I will try my best to solve them.

Second, I plan to pay attention to my health. I will eat more healthily and do more exercise. What’s more, it is important to keep a good mood and be happy every day. If I feel tired, I will listen to some music to relax myself.

Third, I intend to try my best to get along well with the people around me. At school, I will help my friends in need. I will communicate with my parents more. Besides, I will keep smiling and be kind to everyone.

In short, there is no success without effort. I think I can be more excellent if I keep trying.

案例一翻译：

每个人都想变得更好。为了提高自己，我制定了一些计划。?

首先，我会更加努力学习。我打算在课堂上认真听老师讲课，按时完成家务。当我遇到困难时，我会尽力去解决。?

第二，我打算注意身体。我会吃得更健康，做更多的运动。更重要的是，保持好心情，开心每一天很重要。如果我感到累了，我会听一些音乐来放松自己。?

第三，我打算尽力和我周围的人好好相处。在学校，我会帮助有需要的朋友。我会多和父母沟通。此外，我会保持微笑，对每个人都很好。?

总之，不努力就没有成功。我想如果我继续努力，我会变得更优秀。

案例二原文：

As a middle school student. I quite agree with Mr. Tang's opinions. To be a better person. I think I should do the following things.First of all, we should have a healthy life. We should eat well, take more exercise and have enough sleep. Second, we should not be afraid of challenge. We must try our best to solve the problems in our study and life. Third, we should be kind and be ready to help others. We should get on well with others. Finally, we should keep the responsibilities in mind. We should take care of parents and help the weak.

案例二翻译：

作为一名中学生。我很同意唐先生的意见。成为一个更好的人，我认为我应该做以下事情。首先，我们应该有一个健康的生活。我们应该吃好，多锻炼，有足够的睡眠。第二，我们不应该害怕挑战。我们必须尽力解决学习和生活中的问题。第三，我们应该善良，随时准备帮助别人。我们应该和别人友好相处。最后，我们应该牢记责任。我们应该照顾父母，帮助弱者。

案例三原文：

As we can see from the proverb, there is a strong connection between will and success.First of all, the strong will is an important pledge of success.Then, people who have a firm will may well accomplish great tasks.Without hard work, no one can become a talented person in the future.Only in this way can we create a brighter future，can we be a better person.

案例三翻译：

从谚语中我们可以看出，意志和成功之间有着密切的联系。首先，坚强的意志是成功的重要保证。其次，有坚定意志的人可以很好地完成伟大的任务。不努力，将来谁也成不了人才。只有这样，我们才能创造更美好的未来，才能成为更好的人。